tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-938908236031168081.post7417002611460818098..comments2023-06-13T04:37:05.674-05:00Comments on metamorphosing: 123 Acrostic Poetry Memebluerosehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09454168542120117493noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-938908236031168081.post-64842944539616844272008-04-01T01:08:00.000-05:002008-04-01T01:08:00.000-05:00Great idea, Mary. I remember thinking that line wa...Great idea, Mary. I remember thinking that line was a little wordy, but never changed it. I guess it never occured to me that "the" works just as well as "that" in keeping the acrostic form. Duh. Thanks for the advice!<BR/><BR/>I've been out of town. I'll try to get caught up with your blogs tomorrow.<BR/><BR/>Yea, Sophia!bluerosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09454168542120117493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-938908236031168081.post-63089971587310905952008-03-30T19:06:00.000-05:002008-03-30T19:06:00.000-05:00I have one small POSSIBLE suggestion,Consider poss...I have one small POSSIBLE suggestion,<BR/><BR/>Consider possibly deleting in the fourth line up "That which is so it just reads "The process of letting go of those we love"<BR/><BR/>It is quite wonderful just as it is!'<BR/><BR/>We had a great easter and a great 1-year b'day party for granddaughter Sophia.Mary Stebbins Taitthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10626507461216769140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-938908236031168081.post-79047228624932655192008-03-26T23:06:00.000-05:002008-03-26T23:06:00.000-05:00Thanks Mary! I really had fun with this. I didn't ...Thanks Mary! I really had fun with this. I didn't start out to, but "wondering how I make a difference" ended out being what the poem was about.<BR/><BR/>I spent Easter writing poetry. What could be better than that? Hope your family time was lots of fun!bluerosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09454168542120117493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-938908236031168081.post-84317268407002374532008-03-25T10:01:00.000-05:002008-03-25T10:01:00.000-05:00WOW! This came out GREAT! Super Job! Nice topic...WOW! This came out GREAT! Super Job! Nice topic and interpretation! YAY! <BR/><BR/>Sorry it took me to long to come back to this.<BR/><BR/>BB has had some days off and we've been spending time with family.<BR/><BR/>I see other interesting stuff here so I will have to come back for another visit.<BR/><BR/>Hope you had a great Easter. Nice work here! :-D<BR/><BR/>I like that part about wondering how I make a difference--I wonder that too sometimes.Mary Stebbins Taitthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10626507461216769140noreply@blogger.com