Wednesday, February 1, 2012

Silent Poem

I finally wrote a poem to go with this pic, as suggested by my friends here.





Silent


I have been taken down

like an ornament

put away

silent night


I’m going to walk away

like a senile patient

in shame

silent day


I’ll forget what I’ve learned

like keys left behind

at the lake

silent descent


And deposit rusty bones

like leaf covered litter

decorating a

silent trail

4 comments:

Matt D said...

Bang. ;)

It's excellent writing. :)

Sue said...

Your poetry so
beautiful, makes my heart hurt
words just so perfect

I’m trying to do a poem for Melanie - slow going

bluerose said...

Thanks Matt and Sue!

Looking forward to your poem, Sue :D

ashok said...

Awesome on a first read - thanks for sharing!