I found this web site on my friend, Sue's, blog, where people post six sentence excerpts from their work and leave their links to it. This is my first time to try it. Mine are taken from a previous post entitled "Places I Ought Not Go".
I begin to wonder if this lunatic in my back seat is having delusions of being a hero.
“Shouldn't you be radioing in for help or something?”
“And tell them what?!” His calm demeanor snapped. “That I left my squad car on the side of the highway with the keys still in it, jumped into a car with a crazy woman who thinks she can ‘feel’ a monster’s presence, and then runs over God knows what?” He pauses for a second, “Probably some poor motorist who was stranded and looking for help… I’m gonna lose my job over this one.”
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so excellent - we make such a wonderful team - you are marvelous :))
ReplyDeleteYou chose a GREAT set of SIX sentences--definitely makes me want to read more!!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much you two! Your encouragement means so much to me!
ReplyDeleteIntriguing story. A woman who can feel a monster's presence? Excellent!
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ReplyDeleteWelcome to Six Sentence Sunday! Awesome six!
ReplyDelete~Sarah
Sounds good. Sarcasm. I love it
ReplyDeleteThis made me chuckle. Darkly. I love sarcasm. :D
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Six Sunday! I look forward to reading more :)
Great six. Very funny.
ReplyDeleteLove the setup. Not a motorist, right?
ReplyDeleteOoh, I love a good bit of sarcasm. :D
ReplyDelete*Waving Hello* I’m a first time participant too. I really enjoyed your six sentences. I would love to learn more about the story they came from.
ReplyDeleteGreat entry into the 6sunday world. I love your voice with these characters and in these 6- you hooked me.
ReplyDeleteGreat six. Conveys a lot of info. and makes me want to know more!
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Six Sunday! And fantastic snippet to start :) I love his scarcasm, and i'm definitely wanting to know more about the situation they've found themselves in.
ReplyDeleteFunny. Sarcasm is always appreciated.
ReplyDelete~ Renee
wow, that's a great 6! Would love to read more!
ReplyDeleteGreat six--packed with character and plot!
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Sunday 6... great sentences, love the humour
ReplyDeleteLove this snippet and how he snaps!
ReplyDeleteI love it.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to #sixsunday
Leaves me wondering which one is craziest!
ReplyDeleteWelcome to SSS! Great six!
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the SSS. I just loved your six!
ReplyDeleteLove the tension in this. What a great set up. From delusions of being a hero, to feeling a monster's presence, I'd flip the pages.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the 6S crew! Great 6 to being with!
ReplyDeleteLOL "delusions of being the hero".
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Six Sentence Sunday. Great debut! I'm with Sara. Love the "delusions of being the hero" line. Also, "that I jumped into a car with a crazy woman..."
ReplyDeleteWould definitely like to see more of this!
Super! Love the dialogue! I'm hooked!
ReplyDeleteFull of tension! Welcome to 6SS!
ReplyDeleteWelcome to six sentence sunday!
ReplyDeleteLove the snippet! he has a valid point. ;)
Crazy women are the best ones to jump into the car with.
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