This first poem was done for The Mag, but I didn't get it posted in time to link over there.
Danseuse ajustant sa bretelle by Edgar Degas |
Gray
ethereal penumbra
aged gray
cast outside
curtain call
used merely
to incite jealousy
ephemeral ballet
lured backstage
dark maze of
theatrical vanity
he's embarrassed
to be seen with her
This next one was a picture prompt for the Creative Writers of North Houston group.
addiction
innocence fuels imagination
guilt draws a blank
one weekend we hold hands though we're “just friends”
the next, you find better things to do
one weekend we live in a fantasy world
the next, I'm pissed at you
forgiveness fuels imagination
anger draws a blank
sugary addiction feeds fantasy
roller coaster ribbons entangle strength
binding creativity in circus tents
round and round we go
as balloons float away
and rose petals drop to the ground
The last one was a picture prompt for the Word Crafters writing group. The picture was e-mailed to me, so I don't know who to credit or where to link to.
Your incredible use of language always astounds me, then I look at my writing and want to rip it up the last two lines of Gray came as a surprise
ReplyDeleteI’m glad I didn’t have to write for the second pic. But I’m glad you did –loved the rhythm
What does BFE mean? Again the last bit came as a surprise. You’ve got a story in this poem
I love the raw honesty in this piece Lori....very powerful writing! I also love the questions presented in it. I love your blogs!!!
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not one of my better poems, ha, ha
I love these combinations of images and words!!!!
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A lot of powerful emotions here!
Thanks Mary! the pics were prompts from different writing groups that I've been participating in lately. I wasn't in the mood for writing, and had to really force myself to think about them. I was in an angry mood and feeling sorry for myself. I think it shows, lol.
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